Years had passed since Sugriva and Vali had battled at their
school dance. Vali was nowhere to be found by the people, but Vali knew exactly
where he would be. Vali knew Sugriva resided in the far away city of Kishkindha.
Vali wanted his revenge, but he did not quite know how to defeat his younger
brother.
At first, Vali tried to get this so called hero Rama to
defeat his brother. The plan was perfect, Vali distracts Sugriva while the
hiding Rama shoots his magical bow and arrow into Sugriva. The plan was
flawless until Vali learned of what he would have to help Rama with.
“Rama, if you complete this task I will forever be in your
service. What do you wish of me once my evil brother is defeated?"
Rama replied with the only request Vali would not help with.
“Vali, my beloved wife has been kidnapped by the ten-headed Ravana. Her name is
Sita and I miss her beautiful face every day."
Vali could not face his once true love. He was scared of
what Sita would say once they saw each other. Especially if the avatar of
Vishnu himself found out Vali loved his beloved wife. “Rama I am sorry but I
cannot help you find Sita for reasons I will not tell.”
With utter disappointment, Vali left Rama to find another
way to gain revenge on his brother. As he swung back to his tree house, a
celestial being appeared out of nowhere. With a mystical voice, the being told
Vali the story of a magical pond.
“Vali, my friend. There once was a group of brothers that
were princes. These brothers were exiled from their kingdom and wondered the
forest with their mother. All of the brothers were so thirsty one day that I,
The Voice, tricked all of these brothers into drinking my poisonous water. I am
who you need for your revenge. I will help you on one condition. You must come
back every day and give me company for a single hour. If you do not do
accompany me, you will face a deathly consequence.”
“I will do whatever you desire.”
Vali replied to The Voice.
As soon as he agreed to the plan, the yaksha vanished.
Meanwhile, Sugriva, in hiding, awoke from a slumber to a magical voice. The
Voice spoke sweet words to lure Sugriva to the poisonous pond. As Sugriva
reached the pond, he took the water into his hands and drank a quick drink of
the refreshing water. The poison filled all of his veins. As Sugriva laid their
dying in total shock of what had happened, Vali walked out of the bushes to
look his brother in his face.
“Sugriva, my brother, you do not look very well. I told you
that I would get revenge one day, and that day is today. Goobye Sugrvia.”
Vali had gotten his revenge with the help of The Voice. No
longer would his brother walk the earth. With a bit of remorse, Vali quickly
left the pond to head back home, completely forgetting about The Voices deal….
To be continued…..
Author’s Note: I mixed the two epics that we read this
semester: The Mahabharata and The Ramayana. The timeline is changed from the
original story because Vali had not gotten revenge against his brother until
after the Pandavas have died. I decided to have all of the Pandavas die from the pond to create a story for the Voice to tell Vali. Also, I included The Voice
in my story because I felt he was key in the Mahabharata. The celestial being
seems to like making deals with people, therefore I made Vali make a deal with
him in order to kill his brother. The Voice ends up killing Sugriva by the
poisonous pond instead of Rama killing him with his bow and arrow. I felt that this would allow the reader to fear the Voice even more. I did not
like the way Rama killed Sugriva so this allowed me to avoid these actions of
Rama. Furthermore, I changed the fact that Vali did not fight Sugriva one on
one, but however, hid inside the bushes until after he drank the poisonous
water. He did not fight his brother straight on but instead relied on a third party to get his revenge. I plan on continuing this story and finally have Vali meet up with Sita
again, along with Rama.
